February 12, 200917 yr Experimenting with a new style, wanted some C/C on this. My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages.
February 12, 200917 yr While you have a nice concept, I don't think that the render works well with the background. The render seems more like a sketchy drawing (the lines seem very pixellated and not very smooth), but in contrast, the background is very smooth. I think I would have expected more of a grungy style background to go with the sketch-like render. But maybe that's just me :ohnoes: I just think that they just seem too different. - 99 fletching | 99 thieving | 99 construction | 99 herblore | 99 smithing | 99 woodcutting - - 99 runecrafting - 99 prayer - 125 combat - 95 farming - - Blog - DeviantART - Book Reviews & Blog
February 12, 200917 yr Looks good. One of your best tags. The flow is really good, and the stark B&W contrast is also very good. Can I haz it?
February 12, 200917 yr Author Yes you can haz it. Tripis, that was the style I wanted ;) It was for SOTW on Sublime, with the theme being Comics ;) My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages.
February 12, 200917 yr Too much contrast on the focal. I also suggest that you blend the focals right arm into the picture because it looks slightly awkward because it's cut just in the corner there.
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