Ouchy Posted February 12, 2009 Share Posted February 12, 2009 Experimenting with a new style, wanted some C/C on this. My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tripsis Posted February 12, 2009 Share Posted February 12, 2009 While you have a nice concept, I don't think that the render works well with the background. The render seems more like a sketchy drawing (the lines seem very pixellated and not very smooth), but in contrast, the background is very smooth. I think I would have expected more of a grungy style background to go with the sketch-like render. But maybe that's just me :ohnoes: I just think that they just seem too different. - 99 fletching | 99 thieving | 99 construction | 99 herblore | 99 smithing | 99 woodcutting - - 99 runecrafting - 99 prayer - 125 combat - 95 farming - - Blog - DeviantART - Book Reviews & Blog Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted February 12, 2009 Share Posted February 12, 2009 Looks good. One of your best tags. The flow is really good, and the stark B&W contrast is also very good. Can I haz it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted February 12, 2009 Author Share Posted February 12, 2009 Yes you can haz it. Tripis, that was the style I wanted ;) It was for SOTW on Sublime, with the theme being Comics ;) My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SubtleKilling Posted February 12, 2009 Share Posted February 12, 2009 Focal seems a bit sharp, especially the arm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VjuliusT Posted February 12, 2009 Share Posted February 12, 2009 Too much contrast on the focal. I also suggest that you blend the focals right arm into the picture because it looks slightly awkward because it's cut just in the corner there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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