not nearly finished but i just wondered what u thought of my first character so far i think im finished on the char but please C/C......

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

bump

WOw, man, ur good

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If thats a whip hes holding, u gotta fix that somehow, make it more whip-like u know what im saying? Like try get the actual flick of a whip in there, but otherwise, good work!

no its right if right force is applied it will go straight at one point which would hurt most like when you pull hand back and then push forward it flails kind of and would do that ;)

is this better shape and its gonna be wrapping around some1 so y it looks like this

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thats y it looks like this

its looking very nice for your first, but I suggest working a bit more on his left hand (one holding whip) :)

 

 

 

I ts kinda odd having a left handed char, but you can flip the pic around easily to make him right handed :wink:

 

 

 

Next thing is that his left leg is a bit wierd shaped, may need to be more horizontal, and as for his right leg, you may want to give it less of an angle, cuz irl, its hard to stand up like that :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

J272

wots irl mean?

wots irl mean?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Surely you jest? It means in real life.

oh ok.....ive made the left legs better so im not sure wot sorta angle to do on the right leg....do some1 do a stick man with the stance as ur talking about

 

 

 

ive dun the right leg now and the whip looks better...so any more C/C

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

very very nice for ur first :shock: cant wait to see the final version

ty ive seen other peeps work and been inspired

Updated:got the other person being owned by whip no just nee background please could some1 explain how i could put a background...i wanna draw it irl and then scan it and clean up lines but i dont know how to put in the background as wen u copy the chars theres a big white box so the back ground wont go in them spaces

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

here it is so far:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

very very nice, but the guy in rune's right arm should be longer, otherwise, great job :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

J272

could some1 give advice bout the background?please

Looking pretty good so far, you got the proportions and dimensions going right. Flip the sword on the barrows guy's back since he'd have to grab it by the blade to pull it out instead of by the handle. :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Idea for a BG - Barrows place itself?

good idea but i never been to barrows and so i need some pictures of it