June 7, 200917 yr i know its not up to par with other AE videos but meh its my first legit try at it. what i hate about it: the outer layer doesnt fit the layer behind it i left text in the first second of it the red glow on black is just too serious for the song snow is pointless there were no transitions looks mediocre for AE what i like about it: how "noble aloof" looks the smashing effect to the wave generation the song :thumbup: the final portion (presents) for some reason it makes a good channel icon [size="5"][font="Georgia"][b]Staking:[/b][/font][font="Palatino Linotype"][color="#FF0000"][/color][color="#FFFF00"][/color][color="#00FF00"] 4+ mil[/color][/font] [font="Georgia"][b]Current Status:[/b][/font][font="Palatino Linotype"][color="#FF0000"][/color][color="#0000FF"] Training defense [/color][/font][/size]
June 7, 200917 yr Fixed :P I don't really like it, not exactly sure why I don't like it though. I'll edit this with C/C if I think of some.
June 7, 200917 yr Author i know its not really an amazing display of what adobe can do. i'm still working on it. unfortunatly my computers RAM makes rendering previews extremely slow. i realized after uploading that i messed up the layer with the picture that i shattered, for some reason it was not as big as the layer behind it. i could not figure out how to get transitions to work and i feel as if this video was kind of choppy because of it. connorb, i remember seeing that intro a few days ago. i see the camera tool really makes an intro stand out. [size="5"][font="Georgia"][b]Staking:[/b][/font][font="Palatino Linotype"][color="#FF0000"][/color][color="#FFFF00"][/color][color="#00FF00"] 4+ mil[/color][/font] [font="Georgia"][b]Current Status:[/b][/font][font="Palatino Linotype"][color="#FF0000"][/color][color="#0000FF"] Training defense [/color][/font][/size]
June 8, 200917 yr Its kinda strange intro but heres things I thought were odd which could do with improving: At the start there is text with hugely is in the way of the rest of the image. How the snow just disappears instantly. The glowing effect is spreaded to 4 big lines which looks unrealistic. and How it tries to be fun yet in my opinion lacks interest. I'm sorry if I sound too harsh but keep reading tutorials to help you from Google or maybe Deviantart and you'll improve fast, good luck! :thumbsup: ⅹ Last.fm YouTube Team A vs Team B M u s ii X Rocky Keane ⅹ
June 8, 200917 yr Author At the start there is text with hugely is in the way of the rest of the image. just realized that. its not even that obvious until you view it a view times. originally i was planning on using the song "fire" by odb, which is why i put the text there. How the snow just disappears instantly. yeah it looks bad lol The glowing effect is spreaded to 4 big lines which looks unrealistic. at the end? i believe that was the "beam" effect. How it tries to be fun yet in my opinion lacks interest. true. i tried to make it colorful, playful, while being somewhat abstract. when i decided to change the song, the snow didn't really fit and the red glow on black backgroun made it look too serious. I'm sorry if I sound too harsh but keep reading tutorials to help you from Google or maybe Deviantart and you'll improve fast, good luck! :thumbsup: the help is appreciated. its just frustrating that it took me 2+ hours to create this because of RAM issues. [size="5"][font="Georgia"][b]Staking:[/b][/font][font="Palatino Linotype"][color="#FF0000"][/color][color="#FFFF00"][/color][color="#00FF00"] 4+ mil[/color][/font] [font="Georgia"][b]Current Status:[/b][/font][font="Palatino Linotype"][color="#FF0000"][/color][color="#0000FF"] Training defense [/color][/font][/size]
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