bleh :P It looks really flat, but i don't know how to shade the ground to make it more... 3d....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Any tips? Any Crits? Any Comments?

Looks like theres too much slope on the stream :S

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

J272

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(If you want a bigger change, add a horizon :lol: )

Looks like theres too much slope on the stream :S

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

J272

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(If you want a bigger change, add a horizon :lol: )

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It was originally gonna be a waterfall lol.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I based it off of Rimmington willows, so ya :P

girl in water looks like a cardboard cutout

girl in water looks like a cardboard cutout

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Any ideas to make her more 3d?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And to make the stream look better?

k heres what id do to fix the stream

 

 

 

1)grab ur birdy n worm section and slide it down

 

 

 

2)about at the bottom of your name make a horizon line and make that stream wander of in the distance while keeping a little perspective (aka /\ not || all the way) also if you point the stream to a seperation the mountains while having it wind on it will make your character a little more relaxed so she isnt lookin like shes sitting against a wall

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

here i apologize for chopping up your image but this will help explain a lil better

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

as for the shading, if you start off lighter and work your way darker towards the hoizion i think youll find what your looking for-good luck :)

 

 

 

-NSL

Good Idea Nsl, but itll need some redoing on the character, but it should work out well :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

J272

oooh! WIND! I thought you meant wind as in air, and i was wondering what you meant lmao.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My friend told me that as well :) I'll try it out later.

Good tips, also, add depth to the river bank...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe by darkening it as it gets closer to the water?

Good tips, also, add depth to the river bank...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe by darkening it as it gets closer to the water?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

these are all great ideas! Maybe i should darken the middle of the stream?

maybe add some rocks or reeds into the pond atm it looks a bit boring..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

P.S grats on TF leader rank :wink:

maybe add some rocks or reeds into the pond atm it looks a bit boring..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

P.S grats on TF leader rank :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I don't think reeds and rocks will work, since they're more bank types of objects, I need more, middle of the pond objects.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

waterfall huh....Lets never speak of that again.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Here is some suggestion, extend the water fall to make it looks like a water fall. And the water shoudn't be that quiet....look at google image for some help.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Turn the green part above the red into a rocky part. (again, look at google for the texture) So it looks more like a water fall. I geuss you don't like rocks , add some flowers or plants on it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If the rest of the green part looks plain to you..Add flowers?? Butterflies don't hang around in places with no flowers.

I thought it wasa waterfall when I first saw it, then realized it was flat. I suggest making it look like a waterfall, and adding a horizon.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Besides that, it looks pretty good. The girl is really nicely drawn. ;P

oh nooo look out a shark in the water 8) Hehe. Its pretty good sig, i like it. Wut i like about it the most is that it gives you that cozy, peaceful feeling, u know wut i mean? Even though it may look a bit flat like everyone else said, i think it will look really really REALLY good if you fix it, and it looks kind of good now.But hey, thats wut this forum is for :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Keep up the good work.

Idd looks a little flat :)

 

 

 

Wo0ot i like your sig! too ownage that woman that turn, would be dizzy after 100 turns tough :|