Echoes

[edvrmn]

Echoes

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Tink ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ Tink ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ Tink ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ Crunch ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ Tink ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ Tink ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ Tink ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ Crunch ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He could hear it as he made his way down the obscure side tunnel. The unmistakable sound of metal on rock. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅhmmmÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ someone else was here alreadyÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

[sirith_knight]

I assume this is just the first part of the story. I suppose the echo is the tink tink tink cruch, maybe a pick axe tho. Sounds intresting, but don't think you should have the dragon talk, make him use telepathy or something. A talking dragon seems cartoony to me is all. Not really much to say yet, but I will read the next part.

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It is indeapthed with mystery but leave it to long and people will forget the mystery and focus on the story

[dragoncmd]

I assume this is just the first part of the story. I suppose the echo is the tink tink tink cruch, maybe a pick axe tho. Sounds intresting, but don't think you should have the dragon talk, make him use telepathy or something. A talking dragon seems cartoony to me is all. Not really much to say yet, but I will read the next part.

 

 

 

ever played D&D? in that all dragons talk (in their own language of course)