September 7, 200520 yr Echoes Tink ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ Tink ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ Tink ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ Crunch ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ Tink ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ Tink ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ Tink ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ Crunch ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ He could hear it as he made his way down the obscure side tunnel. The unmistakable sound of metal on rock. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅhmmmÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ someone else was here alreadyÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà rs member Nov '02awesome siggy by Alduron aka The Pup
September 7, 200520 yr I assume this is just the first part of the story. I suppose the echo is the tink tink tink cruch, maybe a pick axe tho. Sounds intresting, but don't think you should have the dragon talk, make him use telepathy or something. A talking dragon seems cartoony to me is all. Not really much to say yet, but I will read the next part.
September 9, 200520 yr It is indeapthed with mystery but leave it to long and people will forget the mystery and focus on the story http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts.
October 10, 200520 yr I assume this is just the first part of the story. I suppose the echo is the tink tink tink cruch, maybe a pick axe tho. Sounds intresting, but don't think you should have the dragon talk, make him use telepathy or something. A talking dragon seems cartoony to me is all. Not really much to say yet, but I will read the next part. ever played D&D? in that all dragons talk (in their own language of course) Pm me if you need anything proof-read, I may not be very good, but I am always willing to help.A Seal Clubber is me!A Oxygenarin is me!6*9=42
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