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New WIP (updated!!)


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i dont really know where i wanna go from here so advice and c/c would be apreciated-(no rating please, it aint done :wink: )

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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i did some more work on this today, im not done with the BG, cc apreciated as always :P wip25ky.png

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He's got two right hands...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Don't show the abs through armour, even if it's just embossing. It really doesn't look as good as people think.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The visor's height would mean that his eyes are too far up his face.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The head on the axe should be attached through the haft, not over. Also, make the haft a little thicker, it looks like it'd snap.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Maybe give the character a slight lean to make him look like he's charging instead of just standing there taking a swing.

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oops i didnt even notive that left hand lol :oops: , i see that the axe needs to be moved, what do you mean about the orientation of his body though, please clarify :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I meant that you could try and make him look more mobile rather than just standing still. Makes it a lot more realistic.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Where's the feather part at the end of the full helmet?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He's a smart warrior and realised that a plume is nigh onto useless, even dangerous, to have on a helmet meant for combat.

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