l0rd Posted October 11, 2009 Share Posted October 11, 2009 Everyone is deadRelativity epitomized in the scheme of the infinity, everything is deadA room of peopleEighty years come and death is all that is leftReplaced by new faces Individuality - Illusion - Inception - Deception Painted red handsTemping the devil within meKill the liars who think they're innocent Here comes the interlude The last time, I came aroundOh God, sweet [bleep]ing godDeliver me from numbnessLet me feel something significant Sitting across the tableThe illusion of ecstasy confined within another mortalHuman desire is so genericBut such a potent pill it is!jasddf023r23rj923r923rjk923fj9 Oh the sun in the skyOde to romance Don't fool yourself Longing for a couple wordsAll that it takes to set you free is a few thousand more Composition of a [bleep]ing sentenceIt is not hard to speakBut it is for meOh how [bleep]ing hard it isSo god damn [bleep]ing hard Dirt, dirt, wash muddy waters over meLet me sink into the groundLet me be the trees, soak me in as fertilizerDon't worry, we're all on our wayPlant seed in me, watch idea sprout into a lush garden Aforementioned eyes staring across the table with so much pretext Dreaming of aspirations of dreaming The human race cannot justify its existence through some inherent causeHow absolutely hilarious human prejudiceI hope you all know that the world is still spinning around My head is filled with disease Thanks for the freedomsIt's definitely your job to tell me what I can and cannot doAgain, thanks Petite embodiment of happinessFeelings are mutual yes, but why is it thatI am not part of this mutuality CHORUSGENERIC GENERIC GENERIC IntoxicationDamn right, you definitely see clearer when experiencing extreme happinessThat logic REALLY makes senseDrop your [bleep]ing beer bottle and pocket full of acid It takes all thisThis lubrication for a conveyance of ideas Conversation is screwedI don't want to play this game anymoreWhy can't I just speak?Why can't I just keep quiet?No, I don't hate you Fill me with laughterMan, you're so funnyThanks for depleting chemicals in my brain that make me happyI wasn't going to use them anyway Good thing everyday is so significantI don't remember September 25th 2007I don't remember June 8th 2006Is this a PROBLEM? If a long life is justifiablethen why are you lying on your death bed, unable to remember your first puppy's name? Stop being so usedStop being so passiveStop being so forgetfulStop wanting to be "all good" I'm not happyBut I am contentI wouldn't have it any other way:) [iNSERT "I R EATIN TEH SHIX ATM" BILL COSBY SIGNATURE GIF HERE, LOL] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
issy2 Posted October 11, 2009 Share Posted October 11, 2009 Yay, raw thoughts is back! This one is so different - the nature of it is apocalyptic, political, on a much bigger scale than the first. Personally I preferred the first but I found this one fascinating as well. I love the verse "If a long life is justifiable, then why are you lying on your death bed, unable to remember your first puppy's name?"Basically even despite it's apocalyptic atmosphere I found it refreshing due to its disregard for regularity - verses all different lengths and rhythms, no rhyming scheme, words thrown in here and there - it's original and totally unique : ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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