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Raw Thoughts continued


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Everyone is dead

Relativity epitomized in the scheme of the infinity, everything is dead

A room of people

Eighty years come and death is all that is left

Replaced by new faces

 

Individuality - Illusion - Inception - Deception

 

Painted red hands

Temping the devil within me

Kill the liars who think they're innocent

 

Here comes the interlude

 

The last time, I came around

Oh God, sweet [bleep]ing god

Deliver me from numbness

Let me feel something significant

 

Sitting across the table

The illusion of ecstasy confined within another mortal

Human desire is so generic

But such a potent pill it is!

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Oh the sun in the sky

Ode to romance

 

Don't fool yourself

 

Longing for a couple words

All that it takes to set you free is a few thousand more

 

Composition of a [bleep]ing sentence

It is not hard to speak

But it is for me

Oh how [bleep]ing hard it is

So god damn [bleep]ing hard

 

Dirt, dirt, wash muddy waters over me

Let me sink into the ground

Let me be the trees, soak me in as fertilizer

Don't worry, we're all on our way

Plant seed in me, watch idea sprout into a lush garden

 

Aforementioned eyes staring across the table with so much pretext

 

Dreaming of aspirations of dreaming

 

The human race cannot justify its existence through some inherent cause

How absolutely hilarious human prejudice

I hope you all know that the world is still spinning around

 

My head is filled with disease

 

Thanks for the freedoms

It's definitely your job to tell me what I can and cannot do

Again, thanks

 

Petite embodiment of happiness

Feelings are mutual yes, but why is it that

I am not part of this mutuality

 

CHORUS

GENERIC GENERIC GENERIC

 

Intoxication

Damn right, you definitely see clearer when experiencing extreme happiness

That logic REALLY makes sense

Drop your [bleep]ing beer bottle and pocket full of acid

 

It takes all this

This lubrication for a conveyance of ideas

 

Conversation is screwed

I don't want to play this game anymore

Why can't I just speak?

Why can't I just keep quiet?

No, I don't hate you

 

Fill me with laughter

Man, you're so funny

Thanks for depleting chemicals in my brain that make me happy

I wasn't going to use them anyway

 

Good thing everyday is so significant

I don't remember September 25th 2007

I don't remember June 8th 2006

Is this a PROBLEM?

 

If a long life is justifiable

then why are you lying on your death bed, unable to remember your first puppy's name?

 

Stop being so used

Stop being so passive

Stop being so forgetful

Stop wanting to be "all good"

 

I'm not happy

But I am content

I wouldn't have it any other way

:)

[iNSERT "I R EATIN TEH SHIX ATM" BILL COSBY SIGNATURE GIF HERE, LOL]

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Yay, raw thoughts is back!

 

This one is so different - the nature of it is apocalyptic, political, on a much bigger scale than the first. Personally I preferred the first but I found this one fascinating as well. I love the verse "If a long life is justifiable, then why are you lying on your death bed, unable to remember your first puppy's name?"

Basically even despite it's apocalyptic atmosphere I found it refreshing due to its disregard for regularity - verses all different lengths and rhythms, no rhyming scheme, words thrown in here and there - it's original and totally unique : )

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