Constructive critisizim please. :P

 

 

 

seems rushed.. too dark even for my screen and the character is diddie, usually theres a main focus to a sig. those squiggles and red lines sorta wreck it, try add more into it, objects characters, scenery. You just got a grey sky, black ground, white moon, a tiny dead character with your name.. I think you just added those squiggles to make it seem like more than just tha.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

sorry im not usually harsh just doesn't seem like theres much to it, but if its a first I suppose it's a good try. it's hard doin large landscapes so try do easier things and work your way up..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

sorry but a 2/10 (Ter slaps himself)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I hate givin low scores

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

though that dead guard look cool..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If ya want me to help ya i'll be glad to be of assistance, just ask.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Ter (feels heat swelling from red hand mark on face)