Sy_Accursed Posted November 22, 2009 Share Posted November 22, 2009 Apkmen In description you clearly say "her" several times, but list gender as "male" Also"Zamorak, while a General in Zaros' armies, had managed to obtain the Godstaff of Armadyl, an immensely powerful weapon which would enable him to defeat Zaros. Unbeknown to Zamorak, a Saradomist spy Dhalak had cast a spell of concealment on the staff so that Zamorak could use it against Zaros in battle. He did not know what a threat Zamorak would become in the future." Should say Unbeknown to ZAROS And under Zamorak the wording of his return could be tweaked, it is known his return started the godwars as he returned and wanted revenegne, with his new found godhood, on thoose who banished him. It wasn't simply he returned and later on the godwars happened, the two are directly related. Under Guthix theres a failure to mention the fact his symbol of the scales (As seen in poh altars).No proof the world was barren and lifeless when he arrived, all info suggests he found a fully formed world made by the Elder gods and that he simply brought many intelligent races to the world. Also the guide could do well to mention the Elder gods exsistance, even though we known nothing about them beyond they are more pwoerful than Guthix and seem to of still been present when guthix first arrived and a for a while after. Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tryto Posted November 22, 2009 Share Posted November 22, 2009 I've made all the changes you suggested. I added an entry for the Elder Gods, even though we don't know nearly anything about them.Apmeken was a female, so I changed the heading, and Guthix's symbol of scales was added to his entry. Also tweaked the Zamorak information. Thanks for the help! When a true genius appears in the world, you may know him by this sign, that the dunces are all in confederacy against him. ~Jonathan SwiftWebsite Updates/Corrections here. WE APPRECIATE YOUR INPUT! Crewbie's Missions!Contributor of the Day!Thanks to artists: Destro3979, Guthix121, Shivers21, and Unoalexi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sy_Accursed Posted November 23, 2009 Author Share Posted November 23, 2009 Oh and I just noticed: You don't mention guthix's twisty root-esque symbol used on most banners etc. And whats this tear drop symbol for guthix? I've nvr come across it and I am generally well versed on the gods Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tryto Posted November 23, 2009 Share Posted November 23, 2009 http://runescape.wikia.com/wiki/File:Guthix_logo.svg I actually think we're talking about the same thing, it looks twisty and rootlike too :P When a true genius appears in the world, you may know him by this sign, that the dunces are all in confederacy against him. ~Jonathan SwiftWebsite Updates/Corrections here. WE APPRECIATE YOUR INPUT! Crewbie's Missions!Contributor of the Day!Thanks to artists: Destro3979, Guthix121, Shivers21, and Unoalexi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sy_Accursed Posted November 23, 2009 Author Share Posted November 23, 2009 ah i see it n that pic, but I've nvr heard it called a tear-drop before. Especially if u refer to the 3d versions eg guthix staff (mage arena) and guthix mjonr its deffo a root thing and not a tear drop Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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