Youhei Posted May 22, 2010 Share Posted May 22, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pandaownage Posted May 22, 2010 Share Posted May 22, 2010 I like it, except for the outline around himAnd something seemes wrong with the flowI'd also make it more red, to go with the glasses Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omar Posted May 22, 2010 Share Posted May 22, 2010 Oh [cabbage], it's youhei. Nixon here.Personally, I like the light around his head, it helps with the composition.Pull down the smudges a bit so they start from guy's shoulders, in my opinion it would fix the flow. Also, it looks like you added a ton of adjustments and erased them on the shades. That's not necessarily something you have to stay away from at all times, I think it's a good idea, but it doesn't really work for the colors you have right now. I'm not sure it'll do, but deep blue and purple for the background seems right, with some red C4Ds as accents near the focal. Make sure it doesn't get too busy, tone down the saturation on the background. Matt: You want that eh? You want everything good for you. You want everything that's--falls off garbage can Camera guy: Whoa, haha, are you okay dude? Matt: You want anything funny that happens, don't you? Camera guy: still laughing Matt: You want the funny shit that happens here and there, you think it comes out of your [bleep]ing [wagon] pushes garbage can down, don't you? You think it's funny? It comes out of here! running towards Camera guy Camera guy: runs away still laughing Matt: You think the funny comes out of your mother[bleep]ing creativity? Comes out of Satan, mother[bleep]er! nn--ngh! pushes Camera guy down Camera guy: Hoooholy [bleep]! Matt: FUNNY ISN'T REAL! FUNNY ISN'T REAL! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Youhei Posted May 23, 2010 Author Share Posted May 23, 2010 OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG NIXONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNtagflow, good times, eh?still gfxing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted May 23, 2010 Share Posted May 23, 2010 Looks good, although the smudging is really quite poor. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omar Posted May 23, 2010 Share Posted May 23, 2010 still gfxing?Not as much as before, I stopped making the usual sig style. I got C4D and I use it occasionally, still with PDN. Looks good, although the smudging is really quite poor.I thought so too, you should use harder settings add a little bit more intricacy to it (smaller brush?), especially near the focal. Matt: You want that eh? You want everything good for you. You want everything that's--falls off garbage can Camera guy: Whoa, haha, are you okay dude? Matt: You want anything funny that happens, don't you? Camera guy: still laughing Matt: You want the funny shit that happens here and there, you think it comes out of your [bleep]ing [wagon] pushes garbage can down, don't you? You think it's funny? It comes out of here! running towards Camera guy Camera guy: runs away still laughing Matt: You think the funny comes out of your mother[bleep]ing creativity? Comes out of Satan, mother[bleep]er! nn--ngh! pushes Camera guy down Camera guy: Hoooholy [bleep]! Matt: FUNNY ISN'T REAL! FUNNY ISN'T REAL! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted May 24, 2010 Share Posted May 24, 2010 Better smudging than me :P I like the colours, but am undecided on the outline. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omar Posted May 24, 2010 Share Posted May 24, 2010 Seems to me the outline is part of the stock, removing it would probably mess it up. Matt: You want that eh? You want everything good for you. You want everything that's--falls off garbage can Camera guy: Whoa, haha, are you okay dude? Matt: You want anything funny that happens, don't you? Camera guy: still laughing Matt: You want the funny shit that happens here and there, you think it comes out of your [bleep]ing [wagon] pushes garbage can down, don't you? You think it's funny? It comes out of here! running towards Camera guy Camera guy: runs away still laughing Matt: You think the funny comes out of your mother[bleep]ing creativity? Comes out of Satan, mother[bleep]er! nn--ngh! pushes Camera guy down Camera guy: Hoooholy [bleep]! Matt: FUNNY ISN'T REAL! FUNNY ISN'T REAL! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted May 24, 2010 Share Posted May 24, 2010 I think your right, then maybe incorporate it into the tag. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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