InfamousDuck Posted July 19, 2010 Share Posted July 19, 2010 This is the first signature I have made in well over a year, so would really love to have some feedback and CC on ways to improve it. It was made on GIMP by the way. ~Duck Runescape - Currently In-active and a cancelled membership due to a broken computer and a cabbage laptop!2xBarrowsReward1600SkillTotalReached|08/05/2010(Previously 'Darkknightider', wow that was a bad name :p) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted July 19, 2010 Share Posted July 19, 2010 Any flow you had is killed by the pattern in the right hand side of the background. The singer is centred, which is bad, and there is no light or anything on him. You just slapped him on a background. And the text is far too distracting. My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfamousDuck Posted July 19, 2010 Author Share Posted July 19, 2010 Any flow you had is killed by the pattern in the right hand side of the background. The singer is centred, which is bad, and there is no light or anything on him. You just slapped him on a background. And the text is far too distracting. Ok I'll try to take into account most of what you said but one query, why is it bad that the singer is centred? ~Duck Runescape - Currently In-active and a cancelled membership due to a broken computer and a cabbage laptop!2xBarrowsReward1600SkillTotalReached|08/05/2010(Previously 'Darkknightider', wow that was a bad name :p) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted July 20, 2010 Share Posted July 20, 2010 Google Rule of The Thirds. Images look more natural and better to look at it the focus is more to the left or right, then in the centre. My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmEss Posted July 20, 2010 Share Posted July 20, 2010 You should have had him on the right more, and the texture on the right is pretty bad... Rach's the Bern to my Lambda, Req's the Erika to Rach's Bern. It works. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfamousDuck Posted July 21, 2010 Author Share Posted July 21, 2010 Google Rule of The Thirds. Images look more natural and better to look at it the focus is more to the left or right, then in the centre.Oh ok, thanks. You should have had him on the right more, and the texture on the right is pretty bad... Hmm. Yeah the texture ended up looking nothing like I wanted it to :( ~Duck Runescape - Currently In-active and a cancelled membership due to a broken computer and a cabbage laptop!2xBarrowsReward1600SkillTotalReached|08/05/2010(Previously 'Darkknightider', wow that was a bad name :p) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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