Hey, i made this sig for elfen1's 4 mil competetion :D . Please rate the sig out of 10 so far and give some CC on it. :) . Also, you can give me some ideas on how to improve the sig and tell me if i am doing anything wrong. :wink:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Well here is it:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Update:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks

The house is very bright and stands out too much. Maybe it would be better if it was less detail as it is more of a background image.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Other than that it's quite a nice image, not sure what I would rate it but it's probably worthy of seven or above.

That person tending over the fire l00ks dogdy 9/10 must have taken a while th0

O yea, about that... the people are supposed to be "Elfen like"

More adivice please.... i wanna win this competetion :D :wink:

i really like that 1!

 

 

 

You are getting better in the sec!

the guy chopping the wood looks as though his left hand is round the wrong way, might just be me, looks like his hands are holding it at the same side..

the table with the cloth on is just flat, Try and change it or remove it.

The lady by the fire looks weird... It would look better if she was kneeling. Also, the table looks too 2d.

The guy with the axe is too near the log!

 

 

 

He will hit the dog! :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nice work, except the lady by the fire! 7/10 so far, since no background is added yet

 

 

 

(and yeah, the house is to bright)

Thanks alot for the advise guys, i will those those things as soon i get the time. :D

BUmp :D

the front bit of the house ( not sure what its called.. porch or whatever) is at a different perspective to the rest of the house ( look at the left part of the floor) :D 7/10

Alright i took all the advice i could and changed the sig around a bit...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

here is the finished product..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Please give some more C/C.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks :D