September 28, 201015 yr Living but still, a peaceful mentalityNo danger, no fright; no chance of fatalityAway from the world, a tranquil blissNo need to awaken, all I need is this I see it in front of me, ever so stillSitting on a table, a simple pillSlowly fading in, to anger and hasteI swallow it whole; that tingling taste My body is numb, my conscious is weakMy mind wants to scream, but I cannot speakHappy or sad, I cannot decideLifes troubles I face, but pass with a glide Theres nothing to do, no pain left to feelNo need for a drink, a kiss or a mealI skip through obstacles, day after dayNo more running around, for here I will stay The pain has returned, the pills are all goneMy body cant move, cant let out a yawnMy minds on the loose, but my body stands stillThe damage I take for a small mental thrill As I open my eyes, all I see is a blurThe candle by the window has begun to stirFlames and curtains meet, the walls begin to burnThinking to myself, soon it will be my turn My last moments, as I thoughtI cannot run, I have not foughtThis is my casket, home, my caveMy empty death, my burning grave What could it be? What do I seek?Reality? It's much too bleakMy mind is fried, I cannot think,But now it ends, a final blink Just wrote it, took me about an hour.Critique? "Only by going too far can one find out how far one can go." T.S. Eliot
September 28, 201015 yr what would the beat be like? The once was a mexican called pepsi,Or maybe it's just he had Hep C,He was a pretty cool bro,Bros generally are you know,He hailed from the land of 'taters,He was known to hate many-a-hater,He likes a girl named Lacey,His thoughts about her are kind of racy,And also his dad likes to [rooster].
September 28, 201015 yr Author what would the beat be like? Uhh, it's not a rap bro. If you want, you can record yourself trying to rap it and post it. That would make me smile. :lol: "Only by going too far can one find out how far one can go." T.S. Eliot
September 28, 201015 yr what would the beat be like? Uhh, it's not a rap bro. If you want, you can record yourself trying to rap it and post it. That would make me smile. :lol:ya right, my rap is as good as i dance (not so good) but is it a poem? or is it in some other category of music? The once was a mexican called pepsi,Or maybe it's just he had Hep C,He was a pretty cool bro,Bros generally are you know,He hailed from the land of 'taters,He was known to hate many-a-hater,He likes a girl named Lacey,His thoughts about her are kind of racy,And also his dad likes to [rooster].
September 28, 201015 yr Author what would the beat be like? Uhh, it's not a rap bro. If you want, you can record yourself trying to rap it and post it. That would make me smile. :lol:ya right, my rap is as good as i dance (not so good) but is it a poem? or is it in some other category of music? It's a poem. I might decide to switch it up into lyrics for some songs my friend wrote though. If I do I'll post the edited version here. "Only by going too far can one find out how far one can go." T.S. Eliot
September 28, 201015 yr *facepalm* saw the poem part decription part The once was a mexican called pepsi,Or maybe it's just he had Hep C,He was a pretty cool bro,Bros generally are you know,He hailed from the land of 'taters,He was known to hate many-a-hater,He likes a girl named Lacey,His thoughts about her are kind of racy,And also his dad likes to [rooster].
September 28, 201015 yr Author :lol: It's all good man. "Only by going too far can one find out how far one can go." T.S. Eliot
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