Raven

[Ubi]

Dark, dark feelings burning like fire,

Cruel cold urges filling me with desire,

To rip you apart in a moment of bliss,

It all began with one simple small kiss,

To hear deep pleasure rise from your sternum,

To leave you perspired and near numb,

Tonight you will visit the safe haven,

Flying so high, you'll feel like a raven.

[Skeptical]

I hate the line with sternum. Sorry, I know very little about poetry, but I really despise than one line.