Ubi Posted December 3, 2010 Share Posted December 3, 2010 Dark, dark feelings burning like fire,Cruel cold urges filling me with desire,To rip you apart in a moment of bliss,It all began with one simple small kiss,To hear deep pleasure rise from your sternum,To leave you perspired and near numb,Tonight you will visit the safe haven,Flying so high, you'll feel like a raven. Come to the Haven.http://ArtisticHaven.netAll are welcome. Come to a safe environment for all artists. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skeptical Posted December 9, 2010 Share Posted December 9, 2010 I hate the line with sternum. Sorry, I know very little about poetry, but I really despise than one line. "Those who give up their liberty for more security neither deserve liberty nor security." Support transparency... and by extension, freedom and democracy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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