Unforgiven

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If I told you sorry, would you trust me again?

 

 

 

If I finally surrendered, would this war end?

 

 

 

If I fought for your side, would you let me in?

 

 

 

If I failed to go on, would you push aside my sins?

 

 

 

I admitted I was wrong, then I poured out my heart

 

 

 

So much time has passed, yet we're still so torn apart

 

 

 

The things I've done were horrid, the pain I feel is white

 

 

 

But I'll show you someone different, if you forgive me tonight...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

If I gave you one more chance, would it end up this way?

 

 

 

If I opened up my heart, would you be here to stay?

 

 

 

If I lit one more burning flame, would it die like before?

 

 

 

If I do forgive you, would I be deceived once more?

 

 

 

You risked everything for me, but in the end you lied

 

 

 

It's so hard to believe in those tears of regret you cried

 

 

 

Only when I stop to wish that you were somehow here

 

 

 

Down we lay, let go today, for our end is near...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yeah now that you read it why don't you people diss me out for sucking at writing things...?

eets preety good

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i have to write 25 poems in french,...i dont speak french but its an assignment...and these poems make me seem more of an emo that i am cuz all i know in french is family members and love and stoof

ok... oh well then good luck to you with that :D

That is really good. Its nice seeing something different on these forums for once.

Really awesome poem. Sounds like a girl bs'd you or something? or is it just a poem for fun?

Well, first of all I AM a girl :shock: and I sort of wrote this for another person... :oops: But then again I sort of also did it for fun and I don't know lolzzz..........

I enjoyed it, seriously that was NOT pathetic in a bad poem sort if way, only in the sad sort of way, lol.

Hehe, you got it then. That's why it's PATHETIC :)