Shiny Posted February 17, 2011 Share Posted February 17, 2011 ^More. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
obfuscator Posted February 17, 2011 Share Posted February 17, 2011 I like it but the focus change is really abrupt (and distracting imo). Not sure if that was your intent or not, but I'd try to get the back of the post a little more in focus. "It's not a rest for me, it's a rest for the weights." - Dom Mazzetti Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted February 18, 2011 Author Share Posted February 18, 2011 More up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted February 18, 2011 Share Posted February 18, 2011 1. Slightly overexposed around the top of the post - probably just the metering getting confused. Good focus.2. Focus is off - like I said on Facebook - use a tripod if you are shooting in burst mode at fast shutter speed - make sure to use AF - it's just not going to look good trying to manually focus in burst mode.3. What are you trying to show here?4. It's a nice portrait, slightly overexposed in some areas, but it's a refreshing angle. All I can think of really. Exhausted, sitting in a hotel 150 miles from home on 3G. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted February 21, 2011 Author Share Posted February 21, 2011 Shameless bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Sam Posted February 22, 2011 Share Posted February 22, 2011 Needs more lighting. For a good low key portrait, you need to have more of the lighting on his face, not his clothes. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted February 22, 2011 Author Share Posted February 22, 2011 Self portrait, son :P. Yeah, i'd probably be able to edit that in PS. It has been .jpg raped though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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