AdamÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s revenge

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A man named Adam awoke with a startÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâæ where was he? It was dark, cold and scary. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅWhat the hell?ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

That was a pretty neat little story, but why did he come out way over by Falador, Draynor or wherever? He was in the undergroud pass after all, just wondering. I figured he would have come out in Ardougne anyway. I liked the story however, that was just a little bit that confused me. There was another strange bit after he got drunk with the drawf where I kinda got lost, but it was short. If you want me to rate I would have to give it a 8/10. Felt like you kinda sped through the end too, that's another thing I disliked. Just some constructive critisicm.

from what I understood he was imprisoned in underground pass and found a passage to either taverly dungeon or kamaja volcano. You have a very good story just clean up stuff like that, also it would be cool to have Iban attempt to turn him into a souless. If you did that you would have to describe his feeling and attempts to stop himself from attacking adventurers.

Out of the gloom a man in black robes appeared he approached the cage and declared that he wanted to speak to Adam.ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

Although it was a bit... bitty, it was a cracking story.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I just thought it was rather rushed, I don't know maybe its just most stories I read are done in parts.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But it was good none the less.

yeah that was a pretty good story but you did kind of rush through it especially at the end. you ended it really quickly