Once for some years ago i was running around and scouting the whole world of runescape something strange happend.......

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I remember standing in a dark and scary dungeon full of zombies strong as hell and spiders that could scare u to death just by looking at them.

 

 

 

And it was so dam spooky in that dungeoun full of all kind of ugly monster.

 

 

 

I have seen some scary stuff in my life but this it was crazy it was beyond crazy and spooky...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

However i got scared and wanted out... I didn't want to be there no more alone with these monsters.. then some thing crossed my mind... Why didnt't these monsters attacked me??? As i was thinking the light i was carying went out and i couldn't get it burning again darn i thought and started to walking to what i thought was the extit but after an halv hour of walking i realized i was lost in there so i sat down for i while...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And I heard this strange woice... it was going: The Flesh.. The Flesh... And for a while i thougt i would need new under ware mithil long sword in my right hand and my rune dagger in my left hand and started walk towards the sound.

 

 

 

After a while i reached an lighted up room with an man that was looking 300 years old sitting in the middle.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He said welcome CakanE i have been waiting for u for 17 years now and u finllay found me, after he said that he stated looking me in the eyes and told me to lower my weapons I was like paralyzed and obeyed his orders.

 

 

 

And he started to talk to me of all kind of stuff.

 

 

 

After a long while he told me when i he was young he was an adventuere like me looking for quest all the time.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And one day an Fallen Angel attacked him and the where fighting for 4 hours and then the man stabbed the angel with his sword.

 

 

 

But the fallen angel told him: The only way to defeat me is to eat my flesh.

 

 

 

And the man started to eat slowly the flesh from the angel, and now the fallen angel lives inside of him.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But anyway after the meal he took the angels sword and he went down to this dungeon and lived there tilll now.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

He gave me the sword and said i have eaten the flesh of fallen angels, then he snapped his fingers and I suddenly was lying in Ardounge with the sword in my hand.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Now it has been about 5 years ago since that day and the sword has killed every man or moster ever fought against me...

 

 

 

Every time an enemy aproaches it glows red.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But anyhowe i have searched after that dunfgeon in 6 months now but i cant still found its like it never was there...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But everynight just before i fall asleep i hear these words: The Flesh... The Flesh... Of Fallen Angels... I Think I Died... I Think I Died... I Think I Did... I Think I Did... I'm Dead...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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So That Was My Story...

 

 

 

[All Your Base Are Belong To Us]

so guys wutt u think about the story ?? if ya like it can maybe write an sequel :wink:

eem the story is ok...skipped some bits lol.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i wanted to ask if u got the title from Max Payne lol??

yes i did ur the first 1 to notice... lol thats what i was looking for somebody to lnow where it was from...

bump

i noticed the max payne link as well its ok but a bit confusing may b u shud do a sequel

Yeah reminds me alot of the Maz Payne thing in the crazy house it repeats alot. Good story most stories lose my attention but this one I actually read the whole thing.

i liked it. it wasn't great writing, but the plot was intriguing