yes its good (6/7 out of 10 if u cleaned up the grammar and made it er hoe can i put this "smoother" it wud probly get a 7/8 out of ten please post more
sorry to nit pick wen he is taken to the castel the fur trader ses is ther a medical wing in the HOSPITAL shud be castle can u please put a space between the sentences **noticed suttin else but cant find it now** thanx for postin tha its v good (so far)