Rummy_15 Posted December 9, 2004 Share Posted December 9, 2004 Once upon a time their was a mighty knight named Zefrea "The Dragon Slayer" who lived happly with his wife Rizziu "The Mage Knight" In a small town neer the wilderness called Edgeville. They had a son named Rummy 15 ( by some odd chance). That night a Swerling wind as Stronger than any had seen before. The people of Edgeville Ran out into the empty street and saw what was making this Ghastly wind and then A young knight called J Co Zar yelled out " The dragons, the dragons are attacking". "Thats perpostious we made peace with the dragons along time ago!!!" Mutterd a Strong knight named Arrowz demon. "well It Looks like they have changed their mind" Yelled a small boy. "Whats all this commotion" The of Varrock cried. "Sire the dragons have attacked" Said The Kings Saquire. "Who Is The Fastest runner here?? Anyone....." The king said anctiously " I am sire" pipped up a little boy called Nyomn "well, what are you waiting for..Run for The Barbiarins Village then Go to the watch tower and tell the barbairns that the king sent you go to the top and light the becan. this will bring the white knights of falladour and the guards also the few warrior that there is in Varrock. they will come to the barbairians villagem send them swifterly to this town to fight off these dragons. May Guthix, Zammarok & Saradomin be with you and speed you on your way." That little boy was carried on the wings of the wind. He reched Barbains village. He walked up to the guard standing in front of the watch tower. " What brings you here" he growled. "Th-The King se-sent me to use this watch tower bell to get all the troops to go to edgeville." he panted. "well all alright, but be quick" Nyomn climbed all the ladders up to the very top of the tower he got to the top at last. He tipped the oil on the Straw and Logs, took the tourch off the holder and chucked it into the pile. It burst into flames, Nyomn climed back down the ladders and waited and waited and waited then he heard the sound from the east of wood on wood, metal on metal then a banner appeard out of the darness reading " Guards and Warriors of VARROCK". shortly after that he heard from the west steel on steel and the swishing of capes who chanted "## The Kinghts, The Knights of Faladour, we are the knights of Falladour and we walk to battle in pride and duty.......##" Nyomn ran out to both parties and said to both captians " hurry my village is under attack by dragons" So both compainies and Nyomn walked in a hurried pace to edgeville. Once they got there even Nyomn didn't see anyone.." SIRE, MASTER ANYONE!!!!!" He Yelled. But their was no reply exept a small cry, a babies cry. their where chard bones evry where and he saw some one just alive" he ran over and the man said " look after RUMMY 15" nyomn said soflty '' i will..... everyone find an empty house to sleep in for tonight. whilst i go find this small baby." Nyomn said " I Must Go With You said the leader of the falladour knight whoose name was Party_Marty, if their is no one in this city i will raise this child." Party marty said. Then after what felt like a year ( which was only 20mins ) they found the baby next to a dragon scale quilt....or was it an exasted dragon the Nyomn said " is that was i think it is" Party Marty wispered " Yes A Defennce ammy, let me put an end to this dragon" he pulled oput his rune battle axe and hewed at the dragon head it fell off with the first stroke and for no reason at all a diamond ammy fell out of its mouth Nyomn whispered"......the was my master zefrea's ammy. we should give it to the child" so they did this " Party Marty said" i'll take him to falladour for a while then i'll take him to varrock to train on how to be a knight so party marty took Rummy 15 to falladour Sorry peoples the next bit is in Part 2 ( the childhood ) comming soon! All names exept rummy 15 where purely coinedental [sorry about the spelling Also the God names are spelt wrong too ] ##= singing or chanting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ste_mc_efc Posted December 9, 2004 Share Posted December 9, 2004 yes its good (6/7 out of 10 if u cleaned up the grammar and made it er hoe can i put this "smoother" it wud probly get a 7/8 out of ten please post more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barfbag Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 Pretty good. You wright like me, with every other paragraph you geyt better and have less mistakes. Congrats, 7/10 8) To stand in the valley of death is one thing, to not have been able to stop the chaos is another. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rummy_15 Posted December 17, 2004 Author Share Posted December 17, 2004 Thx guys - realy sorry 'bout the spelling can one person send this to me by private msg so i can keep. and when u send post a message sayin " SENT" - thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jak722 Posted December 18, 2004 Share Posted December 18, 2004 the spelling is messed up in places lol! but its all good :D The Enrichment Center reminds you that the weighted companion cube will never threaten to stab you and, in fact, cannot speak. In the event that the weighted companion cube does speak, the Enrichment Center urges you to disregard its advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salo Posted December 27, 2004 Share Posted December 27, 2004 really good , I PMed u the story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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