ste_mc_efc

i noticed the max payne link as well its ok but a bit confusing may b u shud do a sequel

yeh its good but wtf is it runescape its not is but wot is it its gd hurry up and right part 4 plz

that was class keep writing bring part 3 out soon

yeh they r gr8 plz bring out the next one

ste mc efc was born in hell on a frosty wen the 3rd moon of jupiter was in uranus' quater. he killed the devil seconds after birth escaped from hell and adopted a king black dragon as a pet

nasty nits

its awaful :wink: :wink: post he other chapters please

i liked it hu cares aba grammar its not skul jesus bring out part 2 now plz

yeh that was class bring part 2 out now or else please???

i always closr thew door on ppl nothin noobish aba it its just quick thinking