ogre_boy_18 Posted October 17, 2004 Share Posted October 17, 2004 I was bored and decided to write this rate it from 1 to 10 10 is the best plz dont rate ony my errors. One time long ago, when Ogres were the ruling race enslaving the human species, they would conduct many expirements, including one mating experiment involving healthy enslaved humans and imprisoned Ogres. These expirements lead to the forming of a new race they called Ogreboys. There were 23 of of these species made most of them dieing off because of their vulnerability to disease. They were numbered instead of named because of this, but one of these, the one they called 18, was immune to most diseases. He was created by an enslaved human called Hector Lancelot, and a very mischeiveous female Ogre called Yonna. This young boy was incredibly strong and talented in most skills. The Ogres feared this number 18 so he was locked up in a deep dungeon chained to the wall so he could not escape, but one day the human rebellion came. Lancelot refused to free this number 18 now known as Ogre Boy 18 in fear of him joining the Ogres in fighting them off. Yonna on the other hand didn't care which side he was on, she wanted her beloved son free. She struggled with the Guard, but in the end got the keys from him and released her son. Yonna and Ogre Boy 18 decided to join the human rebellion. What they didn't know was that the Ogres had some secret "weapons". They had always thought that they hadn't existed but they were soon proven wrong. The Ogres had a massive army of dragons. They had been breeding them in a seperate part of the same dungeon that Ogre Boy 18 was in. He had overheard the guards many nights talking about these dragons and their weakness. They would have to make shields only meltable by the hottest of all lavas. This lava was found deep inside a volcano on Karajam Island guarded by some of the strongest creatures known to man. These creatures were known as Lesser Demons. The only way to reach the lava would be for a team to distract all of the lesser demons risking their lives for the sake of the rebellion. Ogre Boy 18, now one of the highest ranking officers in Lancelots army, was assigned ten men to hold off the Lesser Demons While the others would come to smelt their ores into bars to make these sheilds of no fire from this special metal. Somehow, Ogre Boy 18's team succeeded in destroying most of the Lesser Demons with no deaths at all! After that Ogre Boy 18 was assigned more men including one of his best and most knowledgable comopanions, Baker Bums, who was assinged Co-Leader of the new army. Lancelot decided since this army seemed so strong and couragous when under Ogre Boy 18's lead that they would be sent into the "dead lands" after the dragons in their lairs. They would do that while the others would be sent after the Ogres. Every member of Ogre Boy 18's army were given the sheilds of no fire for protection from the dragons deadly flames. They then went off in search of the dragons, and searched for many days with no success, but one day they ran into a lovely young mage known as Lianne Verit. She was the only survivor of the group that was going to defeat the brutal strength of the dragons in the lair. She agreed to lead them to the lair of the dragons if she could help them defeat them. Ogre Boy 18 found that she was very trustworthy so he decided to let this superior mage join his army. They followed Lianne Verit for many days and upon reaching the lair where they found one brave soul fighting a mob of dragons of all colors and watched as he fell in defeat before their might. Upon seeing this brave soul die they decided to go right into combat while the dragons were still worn out. Because of this good choice the dragons were quite easy to defeat, so they ventured farther into the dragons lair. As they walked they encountered an immense heat coming from the next room... They entered the room and encountered 9 black dragons, they had no choice but to fight them to the death. They fought long and hard and lost many men but in the end they defeated them. Upon defeating these dragons the master of all dragons appeared the King Black Dragon. The dragon was the first to attack catching Ogre Boy 18s mother off guard and killing her in one swift blow... This made Ogre Boy 18 furious so he started his crews brutal attack against the dragon losing near 50 men in the process of detroying the horrible dragon. Ogre Boy 18s army headed back to help his father in detroying the ogres, but when he got there it was all over the rebellion was a success. Lancelot was so proud of his son that he decided to give the entire army of rebels to him as a present for doing so well. Ogre Boy 18 decided that since they had detroyed an entire army of dragons that this new group would be called the DragonRulers. Written by: Ogre Boy 18 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ogre_boy_18 Posted October 22, 2004 Author Share Posted October 22, 2004 Is any one even reading this????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rummy_15 Posted October 28, 2004 Share Posted October 28, 2004 It Was Good :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) :) 8) I'll Give It A 7/10 The Names Could Have Been Better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skykenz Posted October 28, 2004 Share Posted October 28, 2004 that's a good try :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mage_o_zammy Posted November 1, 2004 Share Posted November 1, 2004 TOO LONG BUT THE LOOKS OF IT, IT LOOKS GOOD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ste_mc_efc Posted November 6, 2004 Share Posted November 6, 2004 very good nd i dont think its too long is that the end of it if so will there be a sequeal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ra Posted December 11, 2004 Share Posted December 11, 2004 There better be a sequel... pretty good buddy, you should forward it to jagex or somehow make it into a quest :D :D My first ever guide - for advanced farmers (~50+)http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=549364Now With Pictures!! - let me know what you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lilr1ceboy Posted December 11, 2004 Share Posted December 11, 2004 GO DRAGONRULERS!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ste_mc_efc Posted December 12, 2004 Share Posted December 12, 2004 it is really great please do more/ a sequel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoda Posted December 12, 2004 Share Posted December 12, 2004 10/10 Great story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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