Freakyhair Posted January 18, 2006 Share Posted January 18, 2006 Well, it's not complete. It's for a competition so wish me luck ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
brammy7 Posted January 18, 2006 Share Posted January 18, 2006 personally the angle of the wall doesnt match the angle of the table and it seems to make it look a bit strange, nice non of the less DeviantARt - http://brammy7.deviantart.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cupcake Posted January 18, 2006 Share Posted January 18, 2006 I haven't got a clue what is this about....but the face and the hair could do with better line work. the wall looks weird.. I would suggest rub out the all walls from the guy's head to right of the sig. and make them horizontal and darker. the light sorce come from the window...the crate has the wrong shadow. The table is too long. And it doesn't seems it is facing the guy. A little less steeper will do the trick. good luck I geuss :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freakyhair Posted January 18, 2006 Author Share Posted January 18, 2006 Yeah I can see that, I'm fixing it up now but you have to remember this is my secnd pixel =\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cupcake Posted January 18, 2006 Share Posted January 18, 2006 It shouldn't be a excuse If you want to win :idea: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freakyhair Posted January 18, 2006 Author Share Posted January 18, 2006 I know, I'm not asking you to rate my chances fo winning I'm asking you to rate my second pixel taking into account that is my second pixel =\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MD666 Posted January 18, 2006 Share Posted January 18, 2006 We know that. He's just saying don't ask for cc then avoid it using an excuse. *cough* PawClaw :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freakyhair Posted January 18, 2006 Author Share Posted January 18, 2006 I'm not avoiding it, I'm changing it due to the CC but t was a bit harsh considering it's my second pixel. Take a look at some people's first few pixels, alot are pretty poor. I'm not saying this is good but it's not THAT bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MD666 Posted January 18, 2006 Share Posted January 18, 2006 Sigh, I know..... What I am saying is, no CC is too harsh, you have to use it rather than saying, "no I cant do that its only my second EVER pixel!". Get me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freakyhair Posted January 18, 2006 Author Share Posted January 18, 2006 Is this better? YEs I know and I was using it. EDIT: Finished it.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linktrigger Posted January 19, 2006 Share Posted January 19, 2006 thats pretty nice for a second :D but the fingers look a bit deformed.. especially on his left hand. A few fingers look too small and one bends the wrong way at the joints. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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