Well, it's not complete. It's for a competition so wish me luck ;)

personally the angle of the wall doesnt match the angle of the table and it seems to make it look a bit strange, nice non of the less

I haven't got a clue what is this about....but the face and the hair could do with better line work.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the wall looks weird..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I would suggest rub out the all walls from the guy's head to right of the sig.

 

 

 

and make them horizontal and darker.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the light sorce come from the window...the crate has the wrong shadow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The table is too long. And it doesn't seems it is facing the guy. A little less steeper will do the trick.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

good luck I geuss :)

Yeah I can see that, I'm fixing it up now but you have to remember this is my secnd pixel =\

It shouldn't be a excuse If you want to win :idea:

I know, I'm not asking you to rate my chances fo winning I'm asking you to rate my second pixel taking into account that is my second pixel =\

We know that. He's just saying don't ask for cc then avoid it using an excuse. *cough* PawClaw :lol:

I'm not avoiding it, I'm changing it due to the CC but t was a bit harsh considering it's my second pixel. Take a look at some people's first few pixels, alot are pretty poor. I'm not saying this is good but it's not THAT bad.

Sigh, I know.....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What I am saying is, no CC is too harsh, you have to use it rather than saying, "no I cant do that its only my second EVER pixel!".

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Get me?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Is this better?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

YEs I know and I was using it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Finished it..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thats pretty nice for a second :D but the fingers look a bit deformed.. especially on his left hand. A few fingers look too small and one bends the wrong way at the joints.