SirParagon Posted October 27, 2011 Share Posted October 27, 2011 I've been working on this face for a few days now, anything seem out of place, badly shaped? I'm thinking the perspective of the ear is somewhat off. EDIT: [hide=changes based on what Sy_Accursed said][/hide]excellent tips, that helped a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sy_Accursed Posted October 27, 2011 Share Posted October 27, 2011 To me the eyes are too small for the face; even if they are supposed to be the asian type "squinty" eye (for want of a better thing to call it) they need to be bigger and narrow.The nose sees a bit on the large side and ends slightly to low down the face.The lines marking the "triangle" area between mouth and nose are too dark, they should be there via shading now solid lines.The lack of a top lip is quite creepy, I mean theres not even a thin lip there just a line. Also perspectives seem skewy, with the face angle the rear eye should be partially behind nose bridge or atleast nearer to it, the lip shape appears straight on rather than angled like the teeth, the thickest part should be further to the right and you shouldn't see the lips shouldn't quite meet again as the end of the mouth would be hidden. Just my opinions, I like the piece overall. Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirParagon Posted October 27, 2011 Author Share Posted October 27, 2011 awesome, thanks. I'll get to work fixing what you suggested. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirParagon Posted October 27, 2011 Author Share Posted October 27, 2011 [hide=Ok, some slight changes][/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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