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SirParagon

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I've been working on this face for a few days now, anything seem out of place, badly shaped? I'm thinking the perspective of the ear is somewhat off.

 

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excellent tips, that helped a lot.

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To me the eyes are too small for the face; even if they are supposed to be the asian type "squinty" eye (for want of a better thing to call it) they need to be bigger and narrow.

The nose sees a bit on the large side and ends slightly to low down the face.

The lines marking the "triangle" area between mouth and nose are too dark, they should be there via shading now solid lines.

The lack of a top lip is quite creepy, I mean theres not even a thin lip there just a line.

 

Also perspectives seem skewy, with the face angle the rear eye should be partially behind nose bridge or atleast nearer to it, the lip shape appears straight on rather than angled like the teeth, the thickest part should be further to the right and you shouldn't see the lips shouldn't quite meet again as the end of the mouth would be hidden.

 

Just my opinions, I like the piece overall.

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