I just have a few grammatical nitpicks to present. :D

 

In the Apparatus and Pickpocketing section, it says: "As such, you may wish to avail other players of their apparatus by pickpocketing them." This is not, I think, correct use of the word "avail". In this context, it is saying, "you may wish to make their apparatus useful to other players by pickpocketing them." This makes little, if any, sense. Probably a more meaningful thing to say would be: "you may wish to relieve other players of their apparatus by pickpocketing them." Or alternatively: "you may wish to avail yourself of other players' apparatus by pickpocketing them."

 

Hmm, I thought I had something else to complain about, but perhaps not. I'll leave you be for now. :)

Thanks for pointing this out, Lowspell. The sentence has been reworded and you've been credited :thumbup:

Let us know if you see something else! :P

~Wmx