study into the technical aspect of music, with self-portraiture for good measure

[Shiny]

Playing around with diptychs and triptychs, a format I quite like. I'm going for the washed out look on purpose, also, haha. At this stage I would love some critique, as it is still early in my photography assignment. The direction and treatment of the subject matter is all still fluid.

 

 

 

 

[Sy_Accursed]

I mostly like them; only things I find myself annoyed with is picture 2 feels like it just has too much dead space at the bottom and the 4th one (I'm assuming its meant to be mismatched like the 3rd one) is too closely matched up; only mismatch that I instantly see without really looking is sleeve on the left which kinda makes it, at a glance, seem like you just fudged up 1 segment.

[Soa]

First 2 images are very boring, I wouldn't be able to tell what it is if you hadn't mentioned what it actually was.

 

First triptych has too much of the wrong thing dominating the images, more equipment less table.

 

The last image is too literal, it's just a panorama spliced into 5 images. If you did something with the order of the images maybe.. then it would be interesting.

 

Do something no one would think about photographing. Like if you can, take apart the stereo or whatever it is, light the inside and take macro shots of it and place it next to an image of your ear or something. Just an example of a diptych.

[Shiny]

Definitely interesting critique.