Void Dance, A (A Void Dance)

[Game_Freak67]

http://open.tip.it/q...22-void-dance-a

 

In Step 3, it says to search for a 'Broken anchor cellar key'. It's actually a 'Rusty anchor cellar key'.

http://i.imgur.com/2UvWO.jpg

 

In Step 3, it says that Jessika notices a crack in the wall. She actually doesn't, she just happens to be standing beside it.

http://i.imgur.com/3Nc5h.jpg

 

In Step 3 and Items Required, a Pickaxe on your toolbelt is all you need.

http://i.imgur.com/OyjdG.jpg (kinda hard to tell I'm using a Pickaxe, the wall graphics ate it)

http://i.imgur.com/L3jtx.jpg

 

In the second paragraph of Step 3, Jessika's name is misspelt as 'Jesskia'.

 

Under the Beer Barrel video in Step 3, it should place the NOTE before it tells you to go back to the Void Knight boat. I unfortunately did not read this far ahead (and didn't notice the big NOTE either...) and told the bartender the truth (causing me to earn a black tally when I intended to earn white tallies for everything).

 

In the first paragraph of Step 4, it says to grab the tools off the table. It should note that you also grab the materials needed for the job as well (the plank and log).

http://i.imgur.com/LCyPf.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/jeltJ.jpg

 

In the second paragraph of Step 5, the instructions on how to operate the experiment should be a little clearer (it took me several tries before I realized what I had to do). This has to do with the 'current state' of the sample.

• 'If they're the same then you're good to go' sounds slightly confusing as if you could only start the experiment if the upper left window sample pictures are the same. 'you're good to go' should be changed to something like 'don't worry about it until the "Turn sample into" picture changes'
  
• 'If not, you'll have to add materials to the Sample hopper that you're given to complete the experiment. To figure out what you need to add, follow the guide at the top right of the screen.' Slightly misleading wording and sentence structure could be rearranged to be less confusing. Something like 'If not, look at the Reactions table in the upper right corner, locate your current sample material in the left column and the desired product in the right column, then add the third listed material from that row into the Hopper (example written here because I can't remember any of the item names).'
  

Under the second/third paragraph of Step 6, rather than have a player refer to the Falador Castle map and try to locate Sir Amik Varze, just say that he's located on the second floor (third floor USA) on the west side.

 

In Step 7 under the picture of the map, the onion patch isn't exactly south it's more like south-southeast, and the man is located directly to the northeast of the patch, right outside the southern entrance to the Clan Camp (it's possible he may wander a bit farther from the entrance, but for me he was directly outside it). Also, after 'You'll be given a prompt to use an emote', place a colon or semi-colon after this instead of a period.

http://i.imgur.com/unZ78.jpg

 

In Step 8, when it says you have to kill the Black Knight Guardian, Korasi will also fight her own Guardian. Upon defeating your Guardian she will automatically defeat hers no matter how much health it has left. I don't know what'll happen if she defeats hers first, or if it's possible for the Guardian to even defeat her.

[Howlin0001]

In the second paragraph of Step 3, Jessika's name is misspelt as 'Jesskia'.

 

Under the second/third paragraph of Step 6, rather than have a player refer to the Falador Castle map and try to locate Sir Amik Varze, just say that he's located on the second floor (third floor USA) on the west side.

 

In Step 7 under the picture of the map, the onion patch isn't exactly south it's more like south-southeast, and the man is located directly to the northeast of the patch, right outside the southern entrance to the Clan Camp (it's possible he may wander a bit farther from the entrance, but for me he was directly outside it). Also, after 'You'll be given a prompt to use an emote', place a colon or semi-colon after this instead of a period.

http://i.imgur.com/unZ78.jpg

 

In Step 8, when it says you have to kill the Black Knight Guardian, Korasi will also fight her own Guardian. Upon defeating your Guardian she will automatically defeat hers no matter how much health it has left. I don't know what'll happen if she defeats hers first, or if it's possible for the Guardian to even defeat her.

For me the guardian never dealt any damage to Korasi.

 

Sorry for the delay in replying, I have crossed out what I have been able to confirm/correct myself, but I did the first few steps months ago and can't confirm the rest sorry. I have credited you for the changes I have made, thanks :)