February 22, 200620 yr Blood stains the dirt, people come in fine but leave hurt. A smell of fresh flesh, whirls by me. I hide behind the nearest tree. I hear a weap, and then a cry. I look around, I see a young boy about to die. His head is gashed, his eyes are red, he has a cut across his head. I pick him up just in time, because here comes a team of nine. I fight off three, then four. I don't have the food to kill anymore. I run South, Towards the edge of the wild. My left arm my sword, my right arm the child. Im getting tired, short on energy. I stop behind a big oak tree. I had a decision to make, and that I did. I put down my sword, and I ran with the kid.
February 22, 200620 yr I like it, welcome to the forums. Pm me if you need anything proof-read, I may not be very good, but I am always willing to help.A Seal Clubber is me!A Oxygenarin is me!6*9=42
February 22, 200620 yr This is not really me but Search is your friend Please try to use the thread for poems as poems are useally short, where as longer poems shouls be stand alone. I like the poem but the ryhmes are not that great. still its good for the first post. http://www.uzzisoft..../archimage.jpegWell I knew you wouldn't agree. I know how you hate facing facts.
February 24, 200620 yr oh theres an official poem thread now? I'll have to check it out. Pm me if you need anything proof-read, I may not be very good, but I am always willing to help.A Seal Clubber is me!A Oxygenarin is me!6*9=42
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