torque Posted March 10, 2006 Share Posted March 10, 2006 this is the first volume in "Journey Across Runescape". it has one last book to go, and for some reason, it has been a troublesome task to acomplish. maybe i need to put all my idea starters in it, maybe im losing my touch, i dont know. but know this, I WILL MAKE SURE IT IS ACOMPLISHED. now read on. JOURNEY ACROSS RUNESCAPE BOOK ONE: THE BIGINNING CHAPTER ONE: BIRTHDAY Mark woke up one morning to the smell of bacon. He got up and dressed into his favorite shirt, red, short sleeved and blue buttoned. He was very tall and had red hair. He always had this thing about finishing a job when he starts it, once when he was 10, someone bet him 10 gold that he couldn̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t stay a night in Drayor manor. The next morning, the found him lying in a heap of grain on the bottom floor. When he got down stairs, his brother Kain was already quickly eating his scrambled eggs. ̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅWhat took ya̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢?̢̢̮ââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freelancer3k Posted March 10, 2006 Share Posted March 10, 2006 I haven't finished reading but its quite alright, good job :D Although, you could work on your spelling, theres quite a few errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torque Posted March 10, 2006 Author Share Posted March 10, 2006 thanks, i thought microsoft word would pick them up... heheh, aw well. when im finished the final book, i'll fix it and start on volume 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drokles Posted March 11, 2006 Share Posted March 11, 2006 Dammit, its long! and ure gonna make volume 2 later? im really impressed ;) Keep on writing, its some good stuff.... I'll get there!... eventually Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
halmie Posted March 11, 2006 Share Posted March 11, 2006 really good is it your first? i give 8or9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
torque Posted March 11, 2006 Author Share Posted March 11, 2006 wow, thanks! i wish my first was this good. i just have to finish one more book and im finished with volume 1. i want to put a little bit of a dark side in the 2nd volume, because of the events that follow the final book. over all, i want 3 volumes in all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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