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Saradomin.

That was a good story. You left it open for another one. Nice 8-)

Do any of you know where the other plank respawn are and if they're near a bank? Not exactly rich... :P

At last. I was wondering when you were going to write some more. Nice one :wink:

I haven't finished reading but its quite alright, good job :D Although, you could work on your spelling, theres quite a few errors.

Shiva, although i did not know you as a friend, you were a much loved and repected member of our community. You shall be sorley missed by everyone here, yet you will never be forgotten. We will always remember you. In our hearts. Goodbye Shiva. :cry:

Really, really great Sirith, theres not much to improve upon except maybe a spelling error or two. Hope to see more soon :wink:

Anaconda 2 They - i seen it last night... audition And channel 4/5 budget films in general.

When i was small i was playing on top of the garden shed...the roof wasn't that strong and i fell through it. As i fell through my arm caught on something sharp (a nail i think) and i got my arm all cut then i passed out...and ended up getting a bandage..

This is a very good story. I think i'll read this through to the end :D

The story is great sirith. You need to work on your spelling and you've missed some words out along the way. You could probably put less into the detail, but not too little. Overall, i give the story an 8.5/10. Keep up the good work!

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nice story keep writing i wanna see what happens :D (yay first post) EDIT(second post actually no idea where first is)