Shiva, although i did not know you as a friend, you were a much loved and repected member of our community. You shall be sorley missed by everyone here, yet you will never be forgotten. We will always remember you. In our hearts. Goodbye Shiva. :cry:
When i was small i was playing on top of the garden shed...the roof wasn't that strong and i fell through it. As i fell through my arm caught on something sharp (a nail i think) and i got my arm all cut then i passed out...and ended up getting a bandage..
The story is great sirith. You need to work on your spelling and you've missed some words out along the way. You could probably put less into the detail, but not too little. Overall, i give the story an 8.5/10. Keep up the good work!