Took a couple of suggestions from my last sig, and made this one utilizing those pieces of advice.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

More comments and constructive criticism are encouraged and appreciated. Thank you.

Work on the ground its only 1 color :P. The background seems rushed :wink:. The person looks good :D. Work on the background :D

I noticed that too, lol. When I see my two pieces together, they look very similar. I don't really know what to do with the sky and ground though... :?

a cloud partly covering the moon (whiter over top of the moon since its bright) and then make it darker and darker as it moves away. Way less Red in the Lava. Grey skeleton looks bad, make it white. Font is a little hard to read aswell.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[EDIT] ooh you should also do a 1 pixel black outline around the skele, moon, and maybe the rocks and lava if you want. Should make it look better.

I think the guys neck looks fat and the background looks empty, maybe add some trees??. Also the skeleton looks as though it's tripping over the arrows, i don't know what to do about that.

hey ur right about the neck it is a little weird. the 'skeleton' is a corpse on the ground i think. Adding trees is a good idea too.

hope you dont mind i tried thinning out the neck and adding an amulet

 

 

 

:lol:

 

 

 

yea work on the backgrounds a bit more, too plain. Add more trees etc.

it'll probably look better with more sky and less ground

Add outlines for the rocks and the moon. And add more shading to everything.

ya dude just follow wat everyone here said and youll have a killer sig dawg!!

Default colors = Bah-leh.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

MAKE YOUR OWN, Lazy. 8)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways. Good potential.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Zim.

Default colors = Bah-leh.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

MAKE YOUR OWN, Lazy. 8)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways. Good potential.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-Zim.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

just fixing up the neck to see if it looks better lol, im no good at pixels, although ive never tried so i dont really know. Anyways if he duznt like it ill remove it :roll:

I wasn't referring to your pic. I was talking to him, about the original. 8)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

-ZIm.