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do i have to draw the border to ???

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

because i would prefer to of done it 100% myself and thanx

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

what yould you rate it outta 10 i know its my first try but i need more tips because i know expierence is meant to make u much better but i think i'd need tips too.

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well...ok if it wasn't your first try...valuing it as a standard sig my rating would be 5/10. Again since it's your first one that's realy nice but answering your request i'll still point out some problems:

 

 

 

-2 colors for the shading isn't enough, the result is still pretty plain even cause u didn't follow specific light/shadow zones but simply darkened left side of objects.

 

 

 

-Design isn't that bad but needs some more work. Needs to be more detailed and more "clean".

 

 

 

-Anatomy needs some fixing so the body shape is more natural

 

 

 

-Background is very simple, 2 simple. Remember to add something else in your next work

 

 

 

-the image message isn't that clear. Should be a chopped head in his hand right ? then u'd better give the head a more centered and detailed look. Plus we miss some blood on the sword, don't we ?

 

 

 

-The image works pretty well even if, in my opinion, it lacks of a real focal point, may it be a graphical or humoristic one. Something able to catch the eyes or the mind of the viewer.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hope this will help you.

 

 

 

Experience will come and help you for sure, so keep it up 8)

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