I made the first 1 for aussies abstract comp... Incase you havent looked and seen it here it is:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Heres number 2 i made coz i felt like it :lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok woopidoo. This is what you asked me to do... i have changed the colours to waht you recomended and put a border on it... I like it more than the original actually :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Btw guys these are my first sigs ive used renders for so Plz give me tips on improving...

Im allways in for something to rate :)

 

The first one-

 

 

 

The person looks foggy, and text too. and his head looks like he didnt fit into the sig, like you didnt resized it. And no border, which is a must for a good sig (to me)

 

 

 

Second one:

 

The render fills the whole sig, and the yellow doesnt fit his eyes, which glow, it should look better with black-gray stripes.

 

And again, no border

 

 

 

1st sig rating: 5/10

 

2nd sig rating: 7,2/10

 

 

 

Avarage rating: 6,1/10 :)

 

 

 

(its getting better every time though)

Thnx :)

@First:

 

Looks blurry... too blurry. BG lacks things, its way too simple, and that balck montion doesnt goes really with it. You could enhance the BG, add a border and work on the text.

 

 

 

@Second:

 

Those yeys caought my attention, but its not that good because you used the same color of the yeys in a single pattern BG... use your criativity!

 

Add a border to it too :D

 

 

 

Ratings:

 

First: 5/10

 

Second: 5,2/10

 

 

 

~komodo