New drawings - GIVE ME FEEDBACK

[Nazgul740]

 

 

 

for gs thread competetion

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Girl in german 1792 style dress staff for effect

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Preist in some robe can't remember the name made him look a little freaky

 

 

 

 

 

rate hate and no im not frigging ryhmeing so don't post about that :x

[woopidoo2]

Woa very realistic!

 

 

 

The first 3 are worth 8/10,

 

but I dont like the last one that much, 7/10.

[Nazgul740]

k thanks for your input... could you tell me more why you don't like the last one?

 

 

 

not enough relism?

[woopidoo2]

his bottom cloak is somewhat wierd, I think its to small.

 

And the triangle at his right arm, I know what you tried to do, but

 

its to dark compared to the gray arround it. same with the figure left of it.

 

 

 

But his face looks very good. :wink:

[Nazgul740]

mm i see thanks for your input

[Nazgul740]

ffs do i have to beg for feedback? :roll:

[Godslayer]

In general-

 

 

 

Folds are unrealistic

 

 

 

Bodies lack dimension and shape

 

 

 

Heads are a bit to large, legs to small

 

 

 

 

 

Advice:

 

Drap some cloth over a chair and light it by a candle or something. Sketch the folds, then change the lighting and sketch again. Then just keep mixing it up and doing differant fold positions with differant lightsources.

 

 

 

Find a book called Bridgman's complete guide to draing from life, by Weathervane publishing, or a similar book based on anatomy and mastery of sketching.

 

 

 

There you go.

[Nazgul740]

ok ill look for that book...

 

 

 

thank you for feedback