rate plz. i no it sux but dont flame me :P

 

 

 

rate plz. i no it sux but dont flame me :P

wow nice but the space BG dosent quite work :?

not realy supose to b space supose to b night time :P o well

Its nice but the text is a little hard to read, also; try a very dark blue backround with a glowing moon.

 

 

 

But i havent seen First timers draw pixels that well before. just a little cleaning up and your set! 7/10 keep up the good work!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT- another thing is the lighting, it looks like a high school play on the stage, what you should do to fix that is make everything (except the sky)

 

 

 

one or three shades darker to represent night, the shadows should be close to what the ground color is (or whatever its shading on.) the more the contrast the more it looks like there is something bright in the picture. the light should be coming from the moon, sun, torch, light bulb, etc. not from something that does not exist in the picture.

not realy supose to b space supose to b night time :P o well

try adding a castle in there aswell (famous pking spot)