YukkyDins Posted June 17, 2006 Share Posted June 17, 2006 Once upon a time, a noob went to the wild. He died. He went to Lumbridge. THE END. *goody goody voice with big eyes* please comment! Ive twied my bewst i have i have! *someone else vomits* *yuck why on me sounds* *fights* *goody goody tiptoes away, taking his story with him!* OK GUYS! NEVER AGAIN! please comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death45 Posted June 18, 2006 Share Posted June 18, 2006 its comedic but also a little short i suggest you edit it and make it a little more discriptive and longer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xvillexvalox Posted June 18, 2006 Share Posted June 18, 2006 Eh... doesn't seem like you put much work into writing this. And your paragraphs aren't the best either. ^^Sarcasm :wink: ^^ Off topic: We should have an emoticon to indicate sarcasm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YukkyDins Posted June 18, 2006 Author Share Posted June 18, 2006 You're Right! I just thought of this on the spot! I wanted to write something stupid. It wasn't meant to be good. AAfter all, it only took two minutes!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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