Pureleader18 Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 for the GFX contest \ rate, crit, comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldwolflord Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 The red part at the front is a little too flat... Round it off a bit more (I mean the bit closest to us) and it'll look better. The perspective isn't quite right... You've got the face of the car front at a bigger angle to us, than the back. If your drawing were real, the car's right side would be much longer. :lol: Bring that far wheel towards the left, and/or flatten out the front. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 work on you proportions because they are quite off in some places: some of the most obvious are the front is way to short compared to the back, and the wheels are way to small. Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pureleader18 Posted June 20, 2006 Author Share Posted June 20, 2006 yea thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WutangFlu Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 lol.. i was working on a bugatti abstract.. then i was like... nah screw this.. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxshady Posted June 21, 2006 Share Posted June 21, 2006 that looks really nice! cant wait to see the finished version, anyways the front left wheel is a little too scrunched i think? it just doesnt look natural. ------------------------------------------------------------------- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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