Babybyers Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 Last story didn't really work out, and I will continue to write it, but i decided to write this, and see what the response was like... Enjoy! Chapter One I lay quietly in the bushes, hidden under the shrubs. Beside me was my best friend, Ben, who I had grown up with and trained with for the past 15 years. We lay in silence, hearing the footsteps pass us on the nearby path. I nodded in silence to Ben and we both sprang from the bushes and landed on the two bandits. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅOuch! Get off of me!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà The Carter III"I can get your brains for a bargain, like I bought it from Target.Hiphop is my supermarket, shoppin' cart full of fake hiphop artists." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ash6110 Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 So so not great but okay. Doctor this baby up, and finalize the story http://www.draynor.net/code/bar/Noobin\Please join my very new up and coming forumshttp://s3.freepowerboards.com/runeboards Feel free to AIM or MSNM me anytime Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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