Another new sig but this time I'm really looking for any suggestions/tips on improvement... (Don't comment on text... I can fix text some other time... I really want to improve the sig itself first...)

2 main things that could be improved.

 

Colours from render and background although strangely look slightly good (probably cos of the collar) i would change that somehow.

 

 

 

Also the blurring just looks weird i reckon. Did you just smudge and blur?

2 main things that could be improved.

 

Colours from render and background although strangely look slightly good (probably cos of the collar) i would change that somehow.

 

 

 

Also the blurring just looks weird i reckon. Did you just smudge and blur?

 

 

 

Yeah, I smudged and blurred... I played with this for quite a while and tried stuff and deleted stuff... I finally got this and decided to post it before I went nuts trying to find something that looked great...

fair enough. I haven't seen the original render but if the edges are smooth and it does fit just leave it unsmudged.

I like it, but this is my own choice i would just lighten it abit more not much, just a little, i think you would get to see more of the hard work thats gone into the sig.

Its OK, Not much of a background though

good use of light there