first pixel sig would like some well mannered criticism

[crossduke]

 

 

 

:ohnoes: just tell me what you think :pray: and where u think i could improve :wall: . this was a simple sig, i did most as pixel but stole the airbrush for the clouds in the back :-k . keep in mind this is my first ever sig =D> of any style except for some simple editing i did for sum1 \ . please be honest and reasonable :^o and ill check on any responses i get tomorrow :thumbsup: .

 

 

 

thanks,

 

crossduke

 

location: beyond which you can comprehend

 

occupation: the game conquerer

[eckered]

is that the scorpion pit? im oging to assume it is, and say that you need to make the clif stand out more by creating some light spots, dither the sand, and make it different shades. also im not sure why the sky is pink, i dont really like it. i would consider changing that blue, or if you were trying for a sunset, make a sun and add shades of orange and purple and even some red

[runedrune900]

It's good...Better then anything I can make lol..But from other ones that I have seen you should put some texture into it...It looks too simple. Mostly just lines on it...Make them a bit bumpy =)

[pryomancer]

You need alot more detail in it, and raise the cliff above the sand to make it look like it's actulaly higher up

 

 

 

also how did the arrow on the right scorpion come to be like that?

 

its facing the opposite way from where your shooting lol

 

 

 

nice start though