It's not great but CC would be helpful :D

 

 

 

Ok I don't have much time but here's a few quick things:

 

 

 

Arms are too short

 

Don't cover your work up with 'sample'

 

The armor needs shading (not just the highlights that are on it)

 

You need a more original title (My First Pixel is over used..)

~your mage has a blue face

 

~your mele'er has the expresion bob marly gets on his face after taking a smoke

 

~his arms are to short

 

~the poison on the dager is to bold

 

~the dager is to small

 

~why are tehre rocks only under the mele'er?

 

~melers arms are to short

 

~dither the mages robes

 

~shade the melers armour

 

~melers hands are to small

 

~melers amulet is to small

 

~shade the grass

 

~add somethign other then hills in the background... hills are so over used (like the title "pmg myz firstest pixelatorz!!!1onehundredeleven r8ate or h8ate or sk8te plz!!!!)

 

~the anatomy of the guys feet and legs is off...

 

~theres nothing happening... show the guy getting his legs and arms frozen by the mage... show the mage chasing after him... show him trying to break out of the ice... make SOMETHING happen...

 

~i cant see the top of the hair well, but is should come down and cover part of his brow, and not just be pointy at the top

 

~the wrting of the wrd SAMPLe all over the piece isnt very atractive...

 

 

 

 

 

^^i could have showed you all that by sketchign on your piece, but you wrote sample all over it... :wall:

Lol hmm .. here