First Serious Signature Need C/C and Ideas

[fatbill]

Hello

 

 

 

I have been working on this signature on and off for about 1+ month maybe. This is my first pixel signature that I have really bothered to do.

 

I currently don't know what to do now. I don't know what colour the outside of the shield should be and what to do as a back round. Any ideas?

 

 

 

Please give tips to improve and please point out if there is anything wrong with it. Also when I have done I need someone to put some text on it so is it just ok to ask?

[eckered]

ready for all your hopes and dreams to be shot down? k here we go...

 

 

 

 

 

~his head shouldnt be a circle

 

~his hair is gray>.<

 

~you only dithered part of his hair, the other part isnt

 

~the robin hat is just basic triangles

 

~his teath are gray...

 

~his neck is to long

 

~his eye is red

 

~his eye is a dimond

 

~he has got a line on his wrist

 

~his arms are to small

 

~his body is to small for his head

 

~his shield is to small

 

~his skin shouldnt be orange

 

 

 

now for the constructive part!

 

 

 

~your great at dithering

 

~your one on the few people who can draw amulets the right size

 

~you did great on coloring the whip and the ammy.

[pjb21]

regardless of what you may thing it looks like gradient (for all i know it is) either way it looks bad, never use gradient, for a start it uses many colours - bigger file, um, secondly, it ruins the shape and is often done badly, to start with use low colour usage, maybe 2-3 colours and work on more as you go on and get better (im currently on about 5, and i dont like to use to many else it looks gradient - not pixel enough)

 

 

 

secondly, i persnaly feel that the linework could be improved, anatomy, and well, sorry if i sound harsh but everything. draw alot more in rl, its best way to improve your linework, if you cant draw in rl, draing pixel and getting it to look good will be very hard indeed.

 

 

 

look at tuts, i know, it takes time, may be boring but i helps (ok i admit i personaly dont use them, havnt and wont either) but thats just me, do as i say not as i do, i am a foolish person at times and rather stiff minded, but yeah, just use the tuts.

 

 

 

good luck =)

 

 

 

PJB21

[fatbill]

 

~his head shouldnt be a circle - ok i know this, not shoul if i ment to tho

 

 

 

~his hair is gray>.< - hmm good point change the colour later but maybe his old?

 

 

 

~you only dithered part of his hair, the other part isnt - is it all ment to be then?

 

 

 

~the robin hat is just basic triangles - ok ill try to find a picture of one

 

 

 

~his teath are gray - ok ill also try to do them in teeth shape aswel

 

 

 

~his neck is to long - really hmm ok

 

 

 

~his eye is red - yer i like that

 

 

 

~his eye is a dimond - ok ill try and smooth it out

 

 

 

~he has got a line on his wrist - o yer lol woops

 

 

 

~his arms are to small - should it be longer or thicker then?

 

 

 

~his body is to small for his head - darn guess ill edit the body

 

 

 

~his shield is to small - well compared to his head yer lol

 

 

 

~his skin shouldnt be orange - thats just a outline

 

 

 

now for the constructive part!

 

 

 

~your great at dithering - thank you

 

 

 

~your one on the few people who can draw amulets the right size - :XD:

 

 

 

~you did great on coloring the whip and the ammy :XD:

 

 

 

ready for all your hopes and dreams to be shot down? k here we go... -

 

don't worry i was just seeing what i could improve on before i actually finish it.

 

 

 

also PJB21 thanks for your coment, it is dithering or at least a fair good go at it, ok so less colours i can try that :-s the linework i havent really done much on i was doing the other objects and i did look at tuts but saw them to be to stagey then finally i am not to good at drawing people irl but pretty good at drawing objects