i was follin around in paint and decided to experiment with shading and stuff so i gave a mage a go.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

if any of u wanted it or anything go right ahead theres no a/w

 

 

 

and of if u dont want it give it a rating and some constructive critisim. thx!

Its to large. The forum rule is 300x500

 

 

 

great job thought. Excellent for a 2nd try. The backgound is a bit boring. Work on it. Afew things to work on

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Better Shading

 

 

 

Work on the left hand. It stops as it meets the staff.

 

 

 

Background

 

 

 

keep the border going on all sides and the same color

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I really like the fire on the little blast thingy

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

GoodWork

 

 

 

GoKu

o ya lol theres no hand, thx for the advice!

the shading is rubbish... no offense

 

 

 

atleast u draw good :)