September 23, 200619 yr Here's a sketch I did while I was bored in school today. I understand my drawing skill is limited which is why I'm coming here to get opinions on how (not what) I can improve. Saying that the hand is out of proprtion to the rest of the body (which is true for this piece) does not help. Saying that a forearm is about two hands in length and the shoulder span is about 4 hands does help. Anyways, here it is. Problems I know I have with this are: *Hand is out of proportion to the body *Cloak is very squarish and doesn't hang quite naturally *Hand holding staff is just plain bad (I'm bad at hands if you can tell) *Staff has too many angles and not enough curves to look like natural wood I started with the fireball and then did the hand. Up to this point I think it was good. After I started the arm, things fell out of proportion and got messed up. Estimated time to completion: 1 hour of work (between classes and such.) And please, no ratings.
September 23, 200619 yr The head seems to be a little too far back on the shoulders/not centered between the shoulders. I think that is what is wrong, I'm not sure, just kinda looks awkward. Otherwise, nice job. The problems you already said cover anything else I can think of.
September 23, 200619 yr You just have the small thumbnail picture with no link to the big picture with it. Can't really judge it while its so small :(.
September 23, 200619 yr Author You just have the small thumbnail picture with no link to the big picture with it. Can't really judge it while its so small :(. You're supposed to clik on the thumbnail to link you to the larger image. I didn't want to take up so much space by posting the pic directly on the thread so I did a thumbnail :? .
September 23, 200619 yr You just have the small thumbnail picture with no link to the big picture with it. Can't really judge it while its so small :(. You're supposed to clik on the thumbnail to link you to the larger image. I didn't want to take up so much space by posting the pic directly on the thread so I did a thumbnail :? . Click it yourself then. ;)
September 23, 200619 yr You just have the small thumbnail picture with no link to the big picture with it. Can't really judge it while its so small :(. You're supposed to clik on the thumbnail to link you to the larger image. I didn't want to take up so much space by posting the pic directly on the thread so I did a thumbnail :? . I know I'm supposed to click it, just doesnt work for me, doesn't show the big picture.
September 23, 200619 yr Author You just have the small thumbnail picture with no link to the big picture with it. Can't really judge it while its so small :(. You're supposed to clik on the thumbnail to link you to the larger image. I didn't want to take up so much space by posting the pic directly on the thread so I did a thumbnail :? . I know I'm supposed to click it, just doesnt work for me, doesn't show the big picture. Grrrr........my bad. I'll fix it. :oops: EDIT: fixed now
September 23, 200619 yr Well now I can see it :D, some flaws I found by first sight: staff is a bit weird, strange shoulders he has, hands too long. The sleeve on the left hand is good in my opinion though.
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