once upon a time, in a legendary world livid the mighty king harry VI. the people respected this king because he worked hard and long to bring his kingdom to a highly respected place. in his younger years he marketed and raised his skills while other called him noob and tried to take away his spirit. he new somewhere in his heart that he will become a great warrior, a hero, and a great leader in this legendary world. at the age of 14 he decided to go on a great adventure and make new friends in the edenian realm. in this realm happiness and greatness ruled under a a great and kind queen. the young adventurer harry was in owe when he saw all the nobles with thier colorfull and mejestic fashions and so he set a goal to becoming a great warrior under the rule of queen kathrin. as the years went by harry made great trusty friends and also enemies in his way to greaness. at the age of 20 years he was known as the greatest warrior in the legendary universe. he was called upon by the queen, kathrin, to be on of her guards, and so harry excepted the title. one day, just like any other, the sun rose and the birds sang in the morning, until a mighty rumble was heard in the decentant land. the villagers were terriefied because the have never heard of such a rawr! before. queen kathrin called upon harry and his companion the old night to go investigate the cause of the rawr. as harry andd theoldnight prepared for the task onther rumble was heard, but this time it was nearer... the ground shook, the walls rumbled, and the air became intense. theoldnight looked outside the window and cried,"it is a great black dragon!," and so harry ran to invstigate this owndress creature and to his horror he found that it was the great king dragon that all have feard for centuries in his realm. fear krept into his body, soul, mind, he fought to take control over himself and when he heard the queen's cries and his love, princess allen calling his name for help, he came to his sences and whielded the great dragon armoure and his antishield he [bleep] his oynex amulet and his loves necklace for goodluck. our heroes went out and took on the great king dragon single handed. to be countinued...

Not the best story ever...Captial letters would be good. The story is not very Chronological, we know he is gonna make it because of the he is not the king yet.

 

Looks more like a plan than that of a story.

it was just a story....well ok i am a bad writer but i was bored lol :P :lol:

Boredom is not an excuse for a bad story. It shows a lack of respect for the seriousness of writers here.