HARRYPOTT614

trick or treat! i am dressing um as a skeleton!!!!!!

nice picture, i love that warrior with hair too heh it cool dude

i hate it...lol joking its kinda nice and like he said you need a bit of design in the text and make it brighter so that people could see it better, other than that its all good :thumbsup:

nice pics dude....i like the on with a farm looks cool never lived on a farm buy looking forward too, heh :thumbsup:

that is my version of the pic heh, excuse me if it is not that good, its my first anyhow. um the only problem is i dont know what is the thing between his head and the tree.....[/img]

wht with the guy sleeping? um whats the thing between his head and the tree?!?!?!?!

uugh he reminds me of the accursed voldemort that hath killed my dearest parents! :evil: how dare thee post such an eeeevil picture on a forum? :-k :XD:

nice stuff dude :thumbsup:

what are we sopposed to be doing exactly? :uhh:

2 is da best!

to all my muslim brothes or other people who beleive inthe spirit of ramadan! eid is coming up! happy year and happy times \

good for starters lol

how u do those sig dude... i wanna know lol and by the way they cool maybe u can make me one with text on it? thx :thumbsup:

good grammer (accept for a little here and there) a good beginning and ending to the chapters you can make the chapters bigger but the rest is good

um..ok.. lets see.... your a nutral! lol tries again...hmmm well all i can tell you is that its good but you can make it bigger by putting in some detail...and for a story like that...you have to think of a title..there is no way that story can be untitled.... k i will think of something else laterz all in all your story is "showing keen interest in writing" :XD:

i agree, your chapters are short but i cant tell you that its not acceptable your not bad, but your not good either 8-) unfurtunatly like some people here... *points at himself* :wink:

*thinks,"what is a word beginning with an 's',"* *searches the dictonary* nothing found... *searches the internet* ah! found it...how rude.... 8-) :thumbsup:

enjoyed readin yer little story got a chapter towo to it? \

is that a true story? meh hehehehe ok i will spread da word and maybe see ya in runescape 8-)

lol nice chapters u got there very romantic :3> you a natural at it huh :?: by da way ur proofreading rocks, thx!

This tale begins on a dark night, in a great kingdom of Heroes and monsters. It is the story of Wulfy. One foggy night in a kingdom haunted by a terrible monster named Grendel, the king and his noble's laughter was heard in the great hall of his castle. Some were talking in a language unknown to the others, but the drunks sang, a popular Saradomin worship song; Jingle Bells, Guthix smells, Sara all the way! ZamÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢rack died, no-one cried, Hip Hip Hip Hurray! Hay! The raucous celebrating went on all night. The drunk men feasted, drank and filled their stomachs with every kind of food every night in the kingÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s vast hall. But then something terrible happened. One night, just like any other, Grendel came out of his lair in nowhere, clutching a terrible sword. It was blood-red, as crude as death itself. He began to slice heads, drunk heads, wounding some, killing some. It was a gruesome sight. The thing about this monster, Grendel, was that he did not like feasts and parties and loathed such human things. Although it went on every day, the people would still come and try to enjoy their time, drinking and feasting on Karamja rum. Word spreads fast. In no time a great warroir, Wulfy, came to the poor menÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s rescue. You might be wondering, why would he risk his life for a king that can not take care of himself? You see, a long time ago this once courageous king helped Wulfy's father kill a monstruous black dragon in an adventure in the wilderness of the north. In order for Wulfy to earn his honour, he would have to repay the king for saving his fatherÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s life in the fight. One day Wulfy appeared at the castle and asked for the KingÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s permission to attempt to slay the beast. And, of course the king said ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹ÃâYes, Wulfy, you may rid us of this monster!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ So Wulfy hid in the hall one night and laid a trap for the beast. When it appeared, Wulfy leapt out with a heart-stopping cry of ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹ÃâFor my Faaaaaaaaaaaather!!! For my Kiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing!!!!!!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ Grendel whipped around and caught Wulfy with a clawed blow to his head. The warrior fell to the ground, his hands over a gash that ripped from his eye to his lip. But he scrambled up and weilded his great bow, and prepared to shoot the monster. However his arrow struck GrendelÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s foot, and did no damage. Grendel dived upon Wulfy and pinned him down, and flexed his claws. WulfyÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s cut was bleeding profusly by the time he escaped his clutches, and cast a weak but useful spell upon his attacker. Grendel was weakening, getting tired, but he chased Wulfy around the cave, desperate to kill him before it was too late. Abruptly, with a huge, unhuman yell, WulfyÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s arrow struck the monsterÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s hand. Grendel shrieked, and his body shook. Within seconds he lay, still, on the ground. Gasping in shock, Wulfy dared not move. Eventually he worked up the courage to edge forwards, and, with one colossal blow of his sword, he cut off the hand of Grendel. But word spread of his death. GrendelÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s mother, Gertrude, was torn by grief. In her anguish she upturned royal tables and smashed castle windows, stained carpets with her blood and flooded the grounds with her tears. The king was not happy. He asked Wulfy whether he could manage one more job. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹ÃâOf course,ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ Wulfy answered. However, he was really annoyed. To soothe his aching heart he went for a swim. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹ÃâOh no!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ he cried. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹ÃâIÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢m lost!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ He swam furiously, but he could only find a cave entrance. Deciding to get out of the cold water, he swam into the cave and climb out onto the rocks, where he rested until sunset. When he woke, the ground was trembling. What could it be?! Wulfy yelled out in realisation. He had swum into the cave of Gertrude!!! Edging carefully along the wall, trying not to be seen, he flew out his whip. It caught around her throat and she gurgled for mercy. Mercy which he did not give. When Wulfy returned, and the feast that night was undisturbed, the King rewarded Wulfy beyond his wildest dreams. Honour! Wulfy cried to the wild stars. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹ÃâThis is what Honour is!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ proofread by issy thank you issy :thumbsup:

no one else likes this story..... :cry: oh well guess i really have to write better huh :?:

oomg....if i lose a phat when i am a lvl 3 and later know about it i would die, faint and rest for eternity :boohoo: nice story, my heart was beating, thought it was true when i read it...

i have read all those authers bookes...... my top readings are; tom soyer hauklebarry finns etc. i have read all the lord of the rings and the harry potter series tell me something i would have to do before writing the story exp. like write it on a sheet of paper first.. for example if it was you who was writing the story, what would you do first?second? and so on.

lol ok np i will edit it the best way i can and :uhh: prorbably take it throught microsoft word first. thx for the reply though i appreciate you snding me feedback on it :thumbsup: i edited the story and spell checked it. can you go over it again to see what i have missing (and about the fight summury; why cant i have one?) thx send me any feedback on how to write the story in a better way \