i hate it...lol joking its kinda nice and like he said you need a bit of design in the text and make it brighter so that people could see it better, other than that its all good :thumbsup:
that is my version of the pic heh, excuse me if it is not that good, its my first anyhow. um the only problem is i dont know what is the thing between his head and the tree.....[/img]
uugh he reminds me of the accursed voldemort that hath killed my dearest parents! :evil: how dare thee post such an eeeevil picture on a forum? :-k :XD:
um..ok.. lets see.... your a nutral! lol tries again...hmmm well all i can tell you is that its good but you can make it bigger by putting in some detail...and for a story like that...you have to think of a title..there is no way that story can be untitled.... k i will think of something else laterz all in all your story is "showing keen interest in writing" :XD: